10A - Elevator Pitch No. 1


Pitch: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=pGvnmAm8S4U

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  1. Nicolette,

    I thought your pitch was great and to the point. You had great tone and organized the information well. Talking to yourself into a camera is always a weird feeling, but I think you handled it well and spoke directly to the camera. I'm interested to see how you plan to further implement this idea. The only advice I could give is to maybe talk slower.

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  2. Nicolette,
    I like how you delivered your elevator pitch. You identified the opportunity and have a clear thought on how to provide grocery faster and more efficient. Moreover, I like how you point out the problem and address them. I agree with you, and I also think that the issues you have listed in the video need solutions. Overall, I think you did a great job on this assignment.

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  3. Nicolette,
    I liked how your pitch was extremely straight forward. You were very confident and concise with your points about why your opportunity can be capitalized by the businesses (grocery). Also, I could see that you were trying to convey your point to the potential investors in limited time and that you were using real life problems to improve your persuasiveness.

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